Media Pitch & Feedback

Bronwyn:
Initial Comments
Good intro. I like the song title.

Song – I thought the music creation and lyrics (even though I couldn’t make out some of them) sounds good and definitely has good potential. Just saying.

Barn – it’s a really good narrative idea- I think it will work well, could work… depending on the pace of the editing, slow paced editing wouldn’t suit your genre –you probably would anyway

Preferred Idea & Why?
I preferred idea 1 as it is conventional to the genre and leave a lot of room for creativity.

James Craig:
Initial CommentsPresentation - Good presentation

Understanding is good as they are talking about their own band
Original

Idea Opinions -

The ‘even feel’ is good

Like the narrative

Interesting ideas for effects

Preferred Idea & Why ?
Possibly combine the first idea (as your storyline) and the second location as your performance scenes?
Overall the first idea seems to be the most thought about and effective

Track Opinions -

Interesting Track

Matthew Bostock:
Initial Comments

- Interesting Track

- Nice presentation style

- Like idea 1 – utilises conventions of the genre well

- Location 3 suits the genre well – would be ideal setting for the video

Preferred Idea & Why?
I prefer idea 1 as it is the most stereotypical to the genre and has been thought about and planned out very well.

• From all of our peers feedback, I feel that they really enjoyed the sound of our first idea, however, feel that maybe using an abandoned building will alow it to be different and appealing.
• Everyone seemed to enjoy the song but find it hard to pick out the lyrics so a strong narrative seems the way to go.

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